Blog Post 4: Plans on Revisions

 Hi everyone,

I plan to make a handful of revisions for my final proposal. Instead of specifying content analysis I will focus on document analysis with some example from self-usability testing. I will revise the introduction to give examples and circle it back to the research I plan on conducting. My literature review also had a view instances of no page numbers that I will go back and add. I want to itterate that I will be focusing on 5 guides, 3 for one game and 2 for the other. This will allow me to discuss the document analysis in a more in depth approach. This is a minor revision because I was initially going to do 3 guides from 2 games, but ended up only finding 2 for one of them. Overall, these are the revisions I plan on doing in my final draft of the proposal.

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  1. Alyssa BaylesOctober 28, 2024 at 1:35 PM

    Hi Collin! It seems like you have a great plan for your revisions regarding the research proposal. I think it is smart that you are focusing on 5 guides to allow for a more in-depth analysis. It's important that you mentioned revising the introduction to tie back to the research you plan on conducting. This is something I have to do. It seems like you are on the right track for making a solid research proposal.

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  2. Ellie EvansOctober 29, 2024 at 7:33 AM

    Hi Colin! It sounds like you have a clear plan for revisions which will serve you well. I think using fewer reviews and instead doing more in depth analyses will produce better quality data for you to write about. I think that your changes sound good, so I wish you luck on implementing everything for your research proposal.

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